Kindly help me on my personal statement

bal_saul11 · (This post was last modified: 28/03/2006, 06:54 AM by bal_saul11.)

I have made a personal statement but i need someone to check if it's right.

**peaceful_blossom** · 27/03/2006, 11:35 PM

I dont think your allowed to post your personal statements on the forum..but since I dont think the persoanl statement review section is up and running, I shall leave it.

I dont have the time for a full review at the moment...but will come back to it.

The thing I notice firstly is that its short...and the first sentance doesnt catch people attention but looks like a job describtion.

I will come back and review fully.

All the best

**peaceful_blossom** · 29/03/2006, 04:22 PM

Ohh you delated it...

If you want me to look through it, just pm me it.

07/09/2006, 01:48 PM

can any1 help me with my personal statement into a acting course in uni????