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+--- Thread: Kindly help me on my personal statement (/thread-300.html)
Kindly help me on my personal statement - bal_saul11 - 27/03/2006
I have made a personal statement but i need someone to check if it's right.
RE: Kindly help me on my personal statement - peaceful_blossom - 27/03/2006
I dont think your allowed to post your personal statements on the forum..but since I dont think the persoanl statement review section is up and running, I shall leave it.
I dont have the time for a full review at the moment...but will come back to it.
The thing I notice firstly is that its short...and the first sentance doesnt catch people attention but looks like a job describtion.
I will come back and review fully.
All the best
RE: Kindly help me on my personal statement - peaceful_blossom - 29/03/2006
Ohh you delated it...
If you want me to look through it, just pm me it.
RE: Kindly help me on my personal statement - Guest - 07/09/2006
can any1 help me with my personal statement into a acting course in uni????