personal statement

[kimiko]

i really need help with the first sentence and conclusion of my personal statement.
I have a little bit in the first paragraph, but i dont think its enought, and i really have no clue on how to end it. I've read several examples but none of them seem to help me. What sort of things should i be putting in the concluding paragraph ?

[peaceful_blossom]

Conclusion is drawing all your ideas together and ending the text.

In my conclusion I just highlighted why I want to do that course and how I I am looking forward to uni.

Good luck