+- Student Discussion (https://www.studentdiscussion.co.uk)
+-- Forum: Applying to university (https://www.studentdiscussion.co.uk/forum-24.html)
+--- Forum: UCAS Forms & Personal Statements (https://www.studentdiscussion.co.uk/forum-2.html)
+--- Thread: personal statement (/thread-267.html)
personal statement - kimiko - 06/12/2005
i really need help with the first sentence and conclusion of my personal statement.
I have a little bit in the first paragraph, but i dont think its enought, and i really have no clue on how to end it. I've read several examples but none of them seem to help me. What sort of things should i be putting in the concluding paragraph ?
RE: personal statement - peaceful_blossom - 09/12/2005
Conclusion is drawing all your ideas together and ending the text.
In my conclusion I just highlighted why I want to do that course and how I I am looking forward to uni.
Good luck