Beginning of my PS

09/09/2006, 08:15 PM

Hi, just wanted some comments on what may be the opening to my PS

Politics is hard to ignore; it affects everything in life. I have always reacted strongly towards political debates and world issues so feel a degree in politics is for me.

thankssssss Big Grin

11/09/2006, 09:24 AM

Thats gd go with it

Sazle · 15/09/2006, 09:06 PM

Try

Politics is impossible to ignore; it affects everything in our everyday lives. I react strongly towards political debates and world issues (example perhaps?) and so believe that polotics as a discipline is ideal for me to study.

Yehy or nay?

Good luck

18/09/2006, 06:59 AM

hi Vanessa,
Im sure u will accept SAZLE,s edited version which is more concise and succinct. Your version is good but a bit general. eg of "debates and world issues" would suffice.
thank you

24/09/2006, 09:35 AM

hie can u please help me with the beginning of my presonal statement I am applying for social work
here are my first lines

I have always been intrested in people and thies led me into choosing social work

**ijakings** · 24/09/2006, 10:10 AM

Quote:I have always been intrested in people and thies led me into choosing social work

Try getting a few more ideas together - what exactly is it about people that makes you want to do social work? why not nursing or medicine or any other people based subjects. Was there any particular moment you decided you wanted to work with people.

Once you've answered all these questions it should give you a bit more to go on.

30/09/2006, 01:31 PM

Bit late I know, but thanks for the advice, ta sazle!

04/10/2006, 08:48 PM

im currently in my final year of doin a btec nd in computing but am not sure which course to apply nxt yr at uni. cn sum1 help me? if i choose a course then its the ps i hav 2 write