22/09/2004, 06:31 AM
Coming from Germany, I'm having quite a bit of trouble with my personal statement, since very few people here can really tell me whether it's what they want to hear or not.
I've recently finished my Abitur here and would like to go to LSE, Oxford, St. Andrews, Warwick and York- here's my statement, please rip it apart :-)
Admin edit: personal statements should not be posted on the forum - if you want people to take a look at yours post it on the personal statement review at http://www.studential.com/psreview/
I've recently finished my Abitur here and would like to go to LSE, Oxford, St. Andrews, Warwick and York- here's my statement, please rip it apart :-)
Admin edit: personal statements should not be posted on the forum - if you want people to take a look at yours post it on the personal statement review at http://www.studential.com/psreview/