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hi, i feel really cheecky asking someone 2 do this 4 me, but im in dire need of some help from sum1 who knows what they r talking about!! iv just written my personal statement but it needs alot of TLC. is there anybody whho can take a look for me please? id appreciate any feedback at all. im applying for an english degree and am looking at sussex, exeter, bristol and cardiff...but i need my personal statement 2 b very good 4 these unis!! thanks every1 hannah ***Filtered***
I'd be happy to take a look for you!
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thank you, thats really good of you 2 do that. i think the main thing, is that it needs to be cut down. its about 66 lines and has to be 47-or something, so if you can see anywhere where iv repeated myself or "gone on" it'd great if you could point that out for me..btw, who are you?are you appliyng yourself or are you already at uni?
I'm applying myself at the moment, but like you I had exactly the same problem! I had to cut down mine quiet a bit, so I can will easily be able to tell you bits which you can loose!
Um I'm not sure how I'm gonna be able to give you my email though, or how you will send me your PS. Maybe one of the moderators can help us?
I'm applyin for Law at Essex, Leicster, LSE, Manchester, Northumbria and Queen Mary's. Wot bout u?
erm...did yuo do ur statement thru ur college? sorry, i couldnt b bothered signing in..its Hannah.wot r u hoping to do at uni??
aaaanyway, so what r u planing to study at uni? n wot unis r u wanting 2 apply 2??
although still stressed but at least UCAS is over lol! - now just gotta wait for uni replies...........