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suprise, suprise! Help with the PS
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10/09/2006, 10:00 PM
I think you should start again. I know that's probably not what you wanna here but i feel the whole flow of the statment is uninspiring and a bit pompous.
Try and speak as you would normally. all i will say is that the introduction is quite unique and grabbing but a bit long.
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suprise, suprise! Help with the PS - by Guest - 09/09/2006, 03:56 PM
RE: suprise, suprise! Help with the PS - by Guest - 10/09/2006, 08:49 AM
RE: suprise, suprise! Help with the PS - by Guest - 10/09/2006, 09:12 AM
RE: suprise, suprise! Help with the PS - by Guest - 10/09/2006, 03:22 PM
RE: suprise, suprise! Help with the PS - by Guest - 10/09/2006, 10:00 PM
RE: suprise, suprise! Help with the PS - by Guest - 11/09/2006, 06:48 PM

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