For me as many others have probably found this has been one of the hardest short essays i have ever had to write. 2 weeks i've been working on this and what i've come up with is, to say the least, just a tad too long. I really would love some constructive criticism on imporvements and bits i can remove to cut down.
Thanks very much for any help provided!
~Jay
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Thanks very much for any help provided!
~Jay
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