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personal statement for oxford :S
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I am really struggling with this.

I hate writeing about myself.


Can anyone improve this paragraph for me??


Being involved in the Guide Association for over 10 years has given me the opportunity to work as a youth leader with young children, and gain leadership qualifications, which have given me confidence to take on responsibility and communicate to a wide range of people. It has also given me the opportunity to build on my enthusiasm for the environment, through organising conservation projects, including tree planting in my local area. This project had great importance because it enabled the children to be able to have a positive impact on the area they are growing up in.
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personal statement for oxford :S - by Guest - 25/08/2006, 10:10 AM
RE: personal statement for oxford :S - by Athena - 26/08/2006, 05:51 PM

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