Can someone have a quick look at my PS?

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Thanks for your reply Sam, it has certainly made me aware of the holes in my statement! I'm now reviewing it and was thinking this may be a more appropriate introduction:

Ever since I was a child a have been exposed to, and fascinated by, the world of construction and engineering. I remember often pestering my mother and father with constant questions such as ‘what does this do?’, ‘how does it do this?’ and ‘why?’

The first statement comes up as a fragment on word, but i can't think of a better way to re-word it.

I really appreciate your help, English is not my strong point and i hope with this websites help i will be able to write a competent personal statement.

Thanks!