Words I hate people using in personal statements

[lilymiao]

There are loads of other words you can use, a thesaurus is certainly a good idea! (though I didn't use one). I varied my syntax, not always putting "I" first but varying it e.g. "Medicine for me..." or "The attraction of Law..." etc. I did use "avidly read" tho, as well as "a challenge that I relished"! x