hi,is there anybody who has 15mins?

[kersplatt]

hi, i feel really cheecky asking someone 2 do this 4 me, but im in dire need of some help from sum1 who knows what they r talking about!! iv just written my personal statement but it needs alot of TLC. is there anybody whho can take a look for me please? id appreciate any feedback at all. im applying for an english degree and am looking at sussex, exeter, bristol and cardiff...but i need my personal statement 2 b very good 4 these unis!! thanks every1 hannah ***Filtered***