17/10/2009, 01:24 PM
(This post was last modified: 17/10/2009, 01:36 PM by Accountant hopeful.)
Well, i'm probably not the one to say. But it could be alot better, your in a much better postion than I. Many many more relevant experiences however "The Hong Kong University of Science and Technology (HKUST) is one of the best of the universities in the world"-that kind of stood out to be uneeded.
The first paragraph aswell seems, uneeded. Your come across quite arrogant aswell-"I am, I have, I, (I'm so amazing, I can do this)"
The last paragraph from "I assure you", well of course you would think that. The university won't be interested, just a waste of precious line space
Overall I wouldn't use this personal statement.
-The most important factor though, is it not a bad idea to upload your PS whilst in the application process?.-
http://www.studentdiscussion.co.uk/thread-t-1496.html
The first paragraph aswell seems, uneeded. Your come across quite arrogant aswell-"I am, I have, I, (I'm so amazing, I can do this)"
The last paragraph from "I assure you", well of course you would think that. The university won't be interested, just a waste of precious line space
Overall I wouldn't use this personal statement.
-The most important factor though, is it not a bad idea to upload your PS whilst in the application process?.-
http://www.studentdiscussion.co.uk/thread-t-1496.html