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Personal statement first paragraph
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13/09/2004, 10:46 PM
You use "I" too much. Try to make a statement about all of that and say at the end "It is areas like this which greatly fascinate me".
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Personal statement first paragraph - by Guest - 13/09/2004, 07:27 PM
RE: Personal statement - by Guest - 13/09/2004, 08:33 PM
RE: Personal statement - by Willa - 13/09/2004, 10:46 PM
RE: Personal statement - by Guest - 14/09/2004, 05:31 PM
RE: Personal statement - by loftx - 17/09/2004, 11:12 AM
RE: Personal statement first paragraph - by gemma - 24/09/2004, 06:44 PM
RE: Personal statement - by Belle Noire - 25/09/2004, 05:20 AM
RE: Personal statement first paragraph - by Guest - 25/09/2004, 07:26 PM
RE: Personal statement first paragraph - by Belle Noire - 25/09/2004, 10:22 PM

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