02/09/2006, 02:17 PM
Dont agree with that comment gyt35. Shouldn't your first sentence make a bit of an imapact so people will read on? I cant think of anything much worse than 'I want to study maths because...'
We got given a bit of advice at 6th form: dont start with 'I' and use your course name within the first 5 or so words and state what it means to you. That way you're showing a personal link with the subject.
We got given a bit of advice at 6th form: dont start with 'I' and use your course name within the first 5 or so words and state what it means to you. That way you're showing a personal link with the subject.