20/09/2007, 04:20 PM
Hiya, basically I've started my perosnal statement and was quite happy of my opening line. I thought it was different yet showed my passion for the subject I want to do, but when I showed my form tutor she said I should change it to something a bit like this:
"Optometry and orthoptics has always been an interest of mine."
I don't know whether I should change it to something like that or whether that's a bit boring and wont get me noticed and so I should just stick to mine.
Any comments would be helpful x
"Optometry and orthoptics has always been an interest of mine."
I don't know whether I should change it to something like that or whether that's a bit boring and wont get me noticed and so I should just stick to mine.
Any comments would be helpful x