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Electronic engineering and computer science PS!Is this any gd? - balmora2004 - 14/10/2006
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RE: Electronic engineering and computer science PS!Is this any gd? - Guest - 15/10/2006
Pretty good. The only thing I would say is leave out the bit about the range of courses you are applying for. Universities like to think you are applying to them and only them, (they do find out later which other universities you have applied for).
Other than that I think you've done a good job. One more thing though, maybe get rid of 'to conclude' on the last paragraph?
Good luck.