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Personal statement first paragraph
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Quote:Guest - 2004-09-25 7:26 PM

That's not actually passive, by the way - that would be something like "I am greatly fascinated by areas such as this" or "I am greatly fascinated by this". Your example has just made 'areas such as this' the subject, rather than I/me.

I was actually speaking of Willa's example, not my own.
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Personal statement first paragraph - by Guest - 13/09/2004, 07:27 PM
RE: Personal statement - by Guest - 13/09/2004, 08:33 PM
RE: Personal statement - by Willa - 13/09/2004, 10:46 PM
RE: Personal statement - by Guest - 14/09/2004, 05:31 PM
RE: Personal statement - by loftx - 17/09/2004, 11:12 AM
RE: Personal statement first paragraph - by gemma - 24/09/2004, 06:44 PM
RE: Personal statement - by Belle Noire - 25/09/2004, 05:20 AM
RE: Personal statement first paragraph - by Guest - 25/09/2004, 07:26 PM
RE: Personal statement first paragraph - by Belle Noire - 25/09/2004, 10:22 PM

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