Plzzz I need some honest comments
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Plzzz I need some honest comments
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14/12/2006, 10:01 AM
I noticed that alot of people always start their opening statement with 'as a child'. Really need to avoid this avenue. I agree with the above, do something a bit more quirky or start with a quote maybe. Don't take my comments literally as i'm not an expert but thats my spin on things for the opening line!
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Plzzz I need some honest comments - by rokeyyakazi - 12/12/2006, 09:07 PM
RE: Plzzz I need some honest comments - by Guest - 13/12/2006, 10:22 PM
RE: Plzzz I need some honest comments - by aj200019 - 14/12/2006, 10:01 AM
RE: Plzzz I need some honest comments - by Kittah - 20/12/2006, 09:23 PM
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