29/10/2010, 07:30 PM
Just a couple quick things, I haven't finished mine yet so I'm not the best person to critique yours, I'm sure someone else can help.
In the line where you say " I felt quite confident with the colour project" I'd take out "quite" and just say you felt confident. Couple spelling mistakes too but just pop it into spellcheck and ask a friend to proof read it for you before you submit it.
Good luck x
In the line where you say " I felt quite confident with the colour project" I'd take out "quite" and just say you felt confident. Couple spelling mistakes too but just pop it into spellcheck and ask a friend to proof read it for you before you submit it.
Good luck x