Does it matter if it's dense?

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Thanks for the advice - I've fiddled with my statement since I last posted, and I have now got appropriate spaces, but I don't feel like I've lost anything from the content (I hope...) - yeah that's what I thought, it's admissions tutors' job to do it, but I'm quite happy with it now anyway...I know what you mean about rephrasing sentences, I'm used to that from English essays and things, I am never concise in a first draft at all!