22/03/2010, 04:49 PM
I'd remove a few lines here and there to make the PS easier to read, but apart from that - there's little you can do.
It's an excellent personal statement and will get you into most post-graduate courses easily in my opinion. Better to ask another graduate like yourself though.
It's an excellent personal statement and will get you into most post-graduate courses easily in my opinion. Better to ask another graduate like yourself though.