09/11/2006, 11:55 AM
You need a catchy start... Try something that starts with "Hola!! Language is the .... " Something like that... Try including emotions alot... You really need it to grab the readers attention!
a bit lost!
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a bit lost! - by Guest - 08/11/2006, 08:16 PM
RE: a bit lost! - by marmash52 - 09/11/2006, 11:55 AM
RE: a bit lost! - by charlie - 09/11/2006, 11:25 PM
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