suprise, suprise! Help with the PS
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suprise, suprise! Help with the PS
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For me as many others have probably found this has been one of the hardest short essays i have ever had to write. 2 weeks i've been working on this and what i've come up with is, to say the least, just a tad too long. I really would love some constructive criticism on imporvements and bits i can remove to cut down.
Thanks very much for any help provided! ~Jay Admin: Remove at posters request |
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suprise, suprise! Help with the PS - by Guest - 09/09/2006, 03:56 PM
RE: suprise, suprise! Help with the PS - by Guest - 10/09/2006, 08:49 AM
RE: suprise, suprise! Help with the PS - by Guest - 10/09/2006, 09:12 AM
RE: suprise, suprise! Help with the PS - by Guest - 10/09/2006, 03:22 PM
RE: suprise, suprise! Help with the PS - by Guest - 10/09/2006, 10:00 PM
RE: suprise, suprise! Help with the PS - by Guest - 11/09/2006, 06:48 PM
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